Mountainous mutterings, or through the vale And thinks again. There shalt thou learn to stand One in that company, and to commune With them, saying, 'Thou, oh Alp, and thou and thou, Heed of thy peer, lest he perceive thee not- Coleridge, in his "Hymn to Mont Blanc"-a hymn, of which it is the highest praise to say that it is equal to the subject, to Thomson's hymn at the end of "The Seasons," to Milton's hymn put into the mouth of our first parents, and to this grand effusion of Sydney Yendys—says, "Torrents, methinks, that heard a mighty voice, And straight stood still, Motionless torrents-silent cataracts!" Balder has thus nobly expanded, if he ever (which we doubt) thought of the Coleridgean image: "The ocean of a frozen world; A marble storm in monumental rage: Passion at nought, and strength still strong in vain A wrestling giant, spell-bound, but not dead, As though the universal deluge pass'd These confines, and when forty days were o'er, In haste. But Winter lifted up his hand, That never may be ta'en-these fill the gorge, There follow a number of verses, striving like ante-natal ghosts for an incarnation worthy of their grandeur, but not so clearly representing the magnificent idea in the author's mind to ordinary readers as we might have wished. Yet all this dim gulf of thought and image is radiant, here and there, with poetry. But how finely this passage sweetens and softens the grandeur before and after So sings the mother as she milks within True in its ceaseless self, and in its time Our readers will notice, in these and the foregoing extracts, a vast improvement over "The Roman" in the music of the versification. The verse of "The Roman" was constructed too much on the model of Byron, who often closes and begins his lines with expletives and weak words. The verse of Yendys is much more Miltonic. We give, as a specimen of this, and as one of the finest passages in the poem, the following description of Morn: "Lo, Morn, When she stood forth at universal prime, The angels shouted, and the dews of joy Stood in the eyes of earth. While here she reign'd, And could not sin; and so she won of God, That ever when she walketh in the world, The happy wonts of early Paradise. Morn hath no past. Primeval, perfect, she, not born to toil, Steppeth from under the great weight of life, As love, that hath his cell In the deep secret heart, doth with his breath We could select a hundred passages of equal merit; but, as faithful critics, are bound now to take notice, and that at some little length, of what we think the defects of this remarkable poem. We think that the two main objections to "Balder" will be monotony and obscurity. We will not say of the hero, what an admirer of Yendys said of the Monk in "The Roman," that he is a great bore and humbug; but we will say that he talks too much, and does too little. The poem is little else than one long soliloquy-a piece of thinking aloud; and this kind of mental dissection, however masterly, begins, toward the end of 282 pages, to fatigue the reader. "Balder" is in this respect a poem of the Manfred and Cain school, but is far longer, and thus palls more on the attention than they. A more fatal objection is the great obscurity of much in this poem. The story does not pervade it, as a clear road passes through a noble landscape, or climbs a lofty hill, distinct even in its windings, and forming a line of light, connecting province with province: it is a footpath piercing dark forests, and often muffled and lost amid their umbrage. The wailings of Balder toward the close become oppressive, inarticulate, and half-frenzied; and from the lack of interest connected with him as a person, seem unnatural, and produce pain rather than admiration. This obscurity of Yendys has been, as we hinted before, growing on him. We saw few traces of it in "The Roman." It began first to appear in some smaller poems he contributed to the "Athenæum," and has, we trust, reached its climax in the latter pages and scenes of "Balder." It is produced partly by his love of personification and allegory-figures in which he often indeed greatly excels; partly by a diseased subtlety of introspective "Adjusting every witness of the soul, Where, at what time, with what consummate blow, To storm his last retreat, and sack the sense That dens her fierce decease." The second is worse, with the exception of the first four lines: "As one should trace An angel to the hill wherefrom he rose To heaven, and on whose top the vacant steps, His description of the heroine, with all its exquisite touches, is considerably spoiled by a similar unwise elaboration and intricacy of language: "But when the year was grown And sweet by warmer sweet to nuptial June, Till, in a passion of roses, all the time Flush'd, and around the glowing heavens made suit, And onward through the rank and buxom days," &c. There is a mixture of fine fancy with the quaintness and odd phraseology of what follows: "She came in September, And if she were o'erlaid with lily leaves, Could seem no more remote from the corrupt And seething compound of our common flesh!" A splendid passage near this is utterly spoiled by language as apparently affected as anything in Hunt's "Foliage," or Keats'"Endymion:" 'Nature thus The poet Nature singing to herself Did make her in sheer love, having delight In justice, we must add one of the better passages of this very elaborate, and in many points signally felicitous descrip tion: "Yet more I loved An art, which of all others seem'd the voice And argument, rare art, at better close A chosen day, worn like a jewel rare To beautify the beauteous, and make bright The twilight of some sacred festival Of love and peace. Her happy memory Beneath the favoring shades, and the first star The beautiful, untinged by any taint Of mortal dwelling, neither flush'd nor pale, Smith and Yendys differ very materially in their conception |