Lending soft audience to my sweet design, This said, his watery eyes he did dismount, With brinish current downward flow'd apace: 2 O father, what a hell of witchcraft lies For lo! his passion, but an art of craft, This said, his watery eyes he did dismount, Whose SIGHTS till then were LEVEL'D on my face;] The allusion is to the old English fire-arms, which were supported on what was called a rest. MALONE. GATE the glowing roses That flame-] That is, procured for the glowing roses in his cheeks that flame, &c. Gate is the ancient perfect tense of the verb to get. MALONE. 3 O cleft effect!-] O divided and discordant effect!-0 cleft, &c. is the modern correction. The old copy has-Or cleft effect, from which it is difficult to draw any meaning. MALONE. RESOLV'D my reason INTO TEARS;] So, in Hamlet: "Thaw, and resolve itself into a dew." STEEVENS. my white stole of chastity I DAFF'D,] To daff or doff is to put off, do off. MALONE. 4 All melting; though our drops this difference bore, His poison'd me, and mine did him restore. In him a plenitude of subtle matter, To blush at speeches rank, to weep at woes, 8 That not a heart which in his level came, 6 and CIVIL fears,] Civil formerly signified grave, decorous. So, in Romeo and Juliet: 66 Come, civil night, "Thou sober-suited matron all in black." MALONE. 7 Applied to CAUTELS,-] Applied to insidious purposes, with subtilty and cunning. So, in Hamlet: "Perhaps he loves you now ; "And now no soil of cautel doth besmirch 8 not a heart which in his LEVEL came, Could scape the HAIL of his all-burning aim,] So, in King Henry VIII. : - I stood i' the level "Of a full-charg'd confederacy." STEEVENS. Again, in our author's 117th Sonnet : 66 Bring me within the level of your frown, "But shoot not at me in your waken'd hate." Again, in All's Well That Ends Well: "I am not an impostor, that proclaim 'Myself against the level of my aim.” I suspect that for hail we ought to read ill. So, in The Rape of Lucrece : 66 End thy ill aim, before thy shoot be ended." MALONE. When he most burn'd in heart-wish'd luxury, Thus merely with the garment of a Grace O, that infected moisture of his eye, 8 in heart-wish'd LUXURY,] Luxury formerly was used for lasciviousness. MALONE. He preach'd pure maid,-] We meet with a similar phraseology in King John: "He speaks plain cannon fire, and bounce, and smoke." Again, in King Henry V.: "I speak to thee plain soldier." MALONE. like a CHERUBIN, above them hover'd.] So, in Macbeth : - or heaven's cherubin, hors'd 66 "Upon the sightless couriers of the air." STEEVENS. 2 O, that forc'd THUNDER from. his heart did fly,] So, in Twelfth Night: 3 "With groans that thunder love, and sighs of fire." MALONE. that borrow'd motion, seeming ow'D,] That passion which he copied from others so naturally that it seemed real and his own. Ow'd has here, as in many other places in our author's works, the signification of owned. MALONE. 4 In this beautiful poem, in every part of which the hand of Shakspeare is visible, he perhaps meant to break a lance with Spenser. It appears to me to have more of the simplicity and pathetick tenderness of the elder poet, in his smaller pieces, than any other poem of that time; and strongly reminds us of our author's description of an ancient song, in Twelfth Night: "It is silly sooth, "And dallies with the innocence of youth, "Like the old age." MALONE. |